Lesson P1-W3

P1-W3 Descriptive writing Quiz: AQA English Language, Unit 1

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Lesson P1-W3, Descriptive writing: 20 multiple choice questions for the AQA GCSE English Language (8700), Unit 1: Paper 1: Explorations in Creative Reading and Writing, written with Revision Ninja.

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The 20 questions

  1. What is the main aim of descriptive writing?

    • To give clear step-by-step instructions that the reader can follow to complete a task
    • To create a vivid picture of a person, place or object for the reader
    • To set out a formal argument that is supported by evidence drawn from several sources
    • To move events forward at a fast pace so that the reader is hurried towards the climax

  2. Which technique helps a descriptive piece build a clear sense of place?

    • A list of place names with dates attached to each one, set out in a column down the page
    • A numbered outline of the main regions on a map, with each region named and labelled
    • A set of statistics about the population and land area of the region in the last census
    • Sensory detail using sight, sound, smell, touch and taste

  3. Which order is most effective for a scene description?

    • Establish the setting broadly, then narrow to a significant detail
    • List every object in the room in alphabetical order, with no change of focus at any point
    • Describe the ending first and then return to the opening, so the reader meets it last
    • Start with the smallest detail and never widen the view, so the scene remains very small

  4. Which figurative device adds fresh imagery to a description of a sunset?

    • A plain statement that the sun went down at six o'clock in the evening on that particular day
    • A date that gives the exact time of the sunset, recorded in hours and minutes for the reader
    • A metaphor that describes the sky as a bruise fading into night
    • A list of the sunset's colours in the order they appear, with no comparison used at all

  5. Why use varied sentence length in a description?

    • It shows the writer knows the names of the different punctuation marks in the language
    • It makes the description longer so that it reaches the required word count for the task
    • It removes the need for any adjectives in the piece, so the description becomes much plainer
    • It controls pace and emphasis, keeping the reader engaged

  6. Which choice of verbs creates a vivid image of movement?

    • Verbs such as write, read and file that describe the keeping of records in an office
    • Verbs such as is, was and are that describe the state of things rather than any movement
    • Verbs such as say, said and tell that report speech between the characters in the scene
    • Verbs such as stagger, drift and lurch that suggest particular motion

  7. Which adjective best creates a sense of decay in an old house?

    • Crumbling, a word suggesting slow breakdown and neglect
    • Round, a word suggesting a plain and ordinary shape with no particular detail or feature at all
    • Bright, a word suggesting the sun shining through the windows into the rooms on the first floor
    • Brand new, a word suggesting a freshly built and modern home with no sign of age at all

  8. What is a risk of using too many adjectives in a description?

    • The description becomes too short to be assessed fairly by the examiner in the time allowed
    • The description is marked down for using any sensory detail at all, whatever its quality is
    • The description becomes cluttered and the strongest images lose their impact
    • The description loses all its verbs and turns into a plain list of nouns with no action

  9. Which technique creates a tone of unease in a description?

    • Using a few sharp details and an unexpected sound to make the reader uneasy
    • Describing every object in the room in exactly the same tone, with no change of mood at all
    • Listing a long series of neutral facts about the room, with each one given the same weight
    • Using only bright colours and cheerful sounds throughout the whole of the description to set the tone

  10. A description of a market uses the phrase 'a symphony of voices'. Which device is this?

    • Hyperbole, exaggerating the number of people present in the market until it seems endless
    • Alliteration, repeating the s sound across several of the words in the phrase used here
    • Simile, comparing the voices to a symphony using the word like in the sentence of the piece
    • Metaphor, comparing the market's noise to music without like or as

  11. Which opening sentence is most effective for a descriptive piece?

    • The fog had swallowed the harbour, leaving only the groan of unseen boats
    • This is a description of a harbour in a town by the sea, with the boats and the water shown
    • Describing is something that I am going to do in this piece, so I will begin with the harbour
    • There was a harbour and it had some boats on the water, and people were walking there that day

  12. Which detail best develops a character through description?

    • A worn coat with patched elbows, held together with careful stitching
    • A coat that is a standard size and colour found in most shops on the high street today
    • A coat that the writer owned when they were younger and which they still remember wearing
    • A coat that is described as blue and very ordinary, with nothing else special to say about it

  13. Harder: Which judgement about a descriptive piece is the most balanced?

    • Rich detail always makes a description better in every case, whatever the purpose of the piece is
    • Purpose does not matter in description, so the only thing to count is the number of adjectives used
    • Description should avoid any detail at all so that the reader is free to imagine the scene for themselves
    • Rich detail adds atmosphere, but a sense of purpose must guide what is included

  14. Which structural choice helps a description reach a climax?

    • Ending on a list of facts with no comment or image, so the reader is left with the information
    • Repeating the opening sentence word for word at the end, so the description returns to where it began
    • Building detail gradually, then ending on a striking image or moment
    • Placing the most important detail in the first sentence only, so the reader has it from the start

  15. What does 'selecting detail' mean in description?

    • Choosing the details that best serve the mood and purpose of the piece
    • Including every object that could possibly be seen in the room, so that nothing is missed by the reader
    • Choosing details only from a list provided by the examiner at the start of the paper for the task
    • Writing down facts about the place from a guidebook, so that the description is accurate and complete

  16. Which use of personification would suit a description of a stormy night?

    • The wind blew from the west, according to the forecast
    • The wind was measured by the weather station at noon
    • The wind clawed at the windows, desperate to get in
    • The wind moved at a steady speed across the field

  17. Which sentence uses a sensory detail of sound?

    • The cupboard contained three plates, two cups and a jug, all of which were arranged on the shelf
    • The room was twelve metres long and seven metres wide, with a window on each of the two walls
    • The house was painted a pale shade of cream last year, and the paint still looks very fresh today
    • A distant dog barked twice, and the gate creaked open behind them

  18. Why might a writer use a repeated structure in a description?

    • To make the piece exactly as long as the mark scheme requires for the full set of marks
    • To show the writer cannot think of any other structure to use in the description at all
    • To build rhythm and emphasis, so the reader feels the accumulation of detail
    • To prove the description is a poem with stanzas and rhyme, which the examiner has asked for

  19. Harder: A description of a school hall uses only facts. What is the most significant weakness?

    • It contains too many verbs and not enough nouns, so the description moves but does not show
    • It is too long and detailed for a single paragraph, so the examiner has to read it all twice
    • It lacks atmosphere and selective, emotive detail that engages the reader
    • It uses the wrong tense for a descriptive piece, which is a common error made in these answers

  20. Harder: Which evaluation of a descriptive opening that begins with weather is most accurate?

    • It can set mood quickly, though it risks becoming a generic opener if overused
    • It always succeeds because weather is the best topic for any piece of descriptive writing at all
    • It is required by the mark scheme in every descriptive response, whatever the subject of the piece
    • It always fails because weather is never a suitable topic for any kind of descriptive writing

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